Wow, pushing the limits here; that is what fear will do for you.
Well, still some already material left though it has gaps in it: gaps where I do not know details of that moment but know what comes after. I will do that at times. This is a first draft so you are going to get all the lumps and bumps that come with that I am afraid. That said, I am actually pleased with how complete the text has been up to now (full of errors certainly, but no gaps of writing).
Any way, apologies for the extended delay, now on with the show.
Economous
musgrove
© D.M.Cornish
PLEASE DO NOT PUBLISH OR REPRODUCE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION
Chapter 8 PART 3
The Sulk & Through
By a ceaseless rotation of limbre and gastrine, the Douse
Fish was kept at a cracking pace for so small a vessel, passing upon the
ladeboard other craft guided by less impatient souls.
With the
westering sun low in the wan blue dome of almost cloudless heaven, the cromster
made the great rivergate with beats to spare, her timely advent hailed by a
great din of frog chorus ringing from either weedy bank. Dark in the dusk-light
against mounting billows of delicately orange clouds rising to the north and
twinkling with a myriad lantern and window-lights, the Spindle entirely blocked
the river ahead. Against the pallid element Economous could make out the crenelations of the squat bastions that
anchored it to either shore, and see its long low battlements crawling with
people all moving with snail’s speed from right to left – east to west.
“Refuge-seekers,”
the lady passenger said as if she and he had been in constant conversation all
day, speaking with pointed volume to be heard of the squall of frog-song. “They
seek to escape the growing threat of monstrous uprising to the east. And hark,”
she continued pointing to the sheoak lined eastern shore where high-screened
barges disgorged companies of pediteers in the rouge and juverd – red and
yellowed green – mottle of Useless. “The city-states begin to mass their
soldiers.”
Economous
beheld the mass of moving martialing souls on bridge and bank in amazement.
“The threat is truly that grave?”
The woman
looked at him sidelong. “Yes,” was all her answer.
It was
Economous turn to look at her. “And has it reached up to the Undermeer?” he
asked, fearing the answer.
“I do not yet
know,” was the reply. “I presume that is your journey’s end?”
“Aye,”
Economous nodded slowly. “That it is.”
“SEIZE ALL
LIMBRES! RIDE THE TREADLE!” Patefract bawled, cutting conversation short.
Immediately the
poor cromster was again put to shudders as her pace was arrested and she was
brought with handiness of long experience to join the end of the line of
vessels all waiting for their turn to pass through the impenetrable
fortification. Pacing at the steerboard beam of the tiller, Mister Patefract
fretted the much desired summons by the rivergate masters while his small crew
worked to unstep the single mast and lay it secure upon the deck. Muttering and
glowering at the flag-bearing masts that rose from the central hornwork of the
Spindles, the master let out a wordless bark when the Douse Fish’ number was finally signalled with the instruction to
proceed.
With tell-tale
shudder, the cromster drew into one of the four low tunnels through which
vessels were let upstream. Passing under the daggered teeth of a ponderous
black-iron portcullis, Economous felt a strangely anxious thrill – a silly
little fear that they would not be allowed on for some reason. Here on a low
stone pier to the ladeboard-side along with the usual waterside cablemoors stood
a coterie of excise clerks and their guards, each proofed in black and all
looking drawn and drooping in the stark light of their night flares after a day
long of ceasless scrutiny. So very much like the inky, neck-stiff clerical
souls of the city, Economous paid scant heed to their preamble as they declared
their right Imperial to step onto the Douse
Fish’ sacred deck, marvelling instead at the grimy arch of stone a scarce
arm’s reach above where dark algaes glistened with the sweat of tunnel-confined
water. The cromster was tied, the excise clerk’s came aboard review the bill of
lading and the other passenger made her leave.
“The dove’s
flight carry you safe to your harbour, Mister Some-time,” she said, offering this odd parting with the slightest
of curtsies.
“Oh, travel
well, good lady,” Economous bade in farwell, half-standing and fumbling his hat
from his head in surprise, amazed to discover that this woman was even shorter
than she had seemed whilst seated.
“Indeed,” she
said. “If you do happen to discover that nickers threat your destination please
send me word of it.” She passed him an unexpected item – a calling card
inscribed with a name and more amazingly an occupation:
Dolours of Herbroulesse (Ly)
Laude to the August of the Right of the Pacific Dove
This woman was
a calendar!
Yet before Economous
could press for more, this Dolours of Herbroulesse sprang warrior-nimble to the
stone quay with a flash of parti-hued leggings showing through the flaring
shirt of her coat and hurried through a heavy iron-bound door that lead by a
low arch off the stone quay of the tunnel pier.
Cries from the
pier and a officious bow from the chief of the excise clerks told of the Douse Fish’ worthiness to proceed. With
shouts of his own and, Patefract had the cromster continue “under limbres,” as
he ordered it.
“Half ahead by
limbres,” Patefract ordered loudly, smiling finally in satisfaction – an
expression that looked positively wicked on so uncongenial a face.
As the cromster
came out of the tunnel a bright pink sibaline flare shot from a central bastion
into the darkening sky, informing all approaching vessels from either south or
north that they would have to moor for the night in the shadow of the
impassable wall. With sullen clang and a ponderous splash a great black
portcullis dropped behind them as if to add punctuation to the signal: no other
was passing through today.
But the labour
of the Douse Fish was not done.
Despite the closing day, the faithful little craft was made to tread on, pressing
upstream as above her, her crew and sole passenger a slow spectacle of tiny
cosmic lights came out in ones and twos until the entire dome of sky blazed
with spangled fire. Catching a line of other vessels visible only as low
shadows on the faintly glistening water and single dancing mast lamps, Patefract
joined his course to their their’s, becoming now the tail of this improvised
squadron. At first the vessels kept to the left – that is, the ladeboard and in
this moment western – side of the river’s flow, allowing way for south- and
sea-ward bound vessels to pass unhindered upon the right. Yet as they wore on in
silent north-bound convoy each vessel began to prefer a course as close to the
middle of the river as was reckoned prudent, as if their masters were by mystic
accord reluctant to remain near the ladeborad shore. Chimes – or late supper –
was softly called and the meal-time conversation amongst the Douse Fish’ small crew gathered at the bow
happened in a hush, every sentence accompanied by vigilant furtive glances to
the western landfall.
Sitting now
upon the deck, back propped against the bit, Economous ate his own meagre
repast from Bidbrindle’s thoughtful parting parcel – pan-bread, best Wretcher
wide-cheese and parched apple parings – and kept his own puzzled watch upon the
ladeboard shore. “May I ask why you have taken port on the opposite bank to
your course?” he inquired of a passing bargeman.
“’Tis an
unhappy stretch o’ ribbon is all, sir,” the fellow muttered with a nictating
wink. “Discomfittin’ sounds and causeless spookings. Yet fear not; harm seldom
happens.”
Yet as it had
been with the teratologists, rather than frightening him, the intelligence that
monsters might be lurking in shadows and tangles scarcely the length of a long
field away aroused only intense fascination. Wrapping himself in his coat like
a blanket, he stared scarcely blinking to the dark western shoreline, wishing
he had a laggards eyes to pierce the black blank and spy what manner of
hobpossums might be skulking there. He listened pointdly yet no discomforting
sounds came to him across the river but the gentle plash of earthen-reeking
water pushed aside by the blunt blade of the cromster’s bow and the endless
batrachian chorus ringing out from the reedy mud. Undisturbed by man or
monster, it was as if every tribe of frog had turned out to bellow from the sodden
grime – long low hoomings, metalic ringings, repetative baritone mutterings and
high pingings that almost gratted in the ear – a raucous trilling concord that
did not cease even when late coming Phoebë raised her lumpen lunar dial above the dark eastern
line of trees.
With the moon’s arrivial Economous
made a bunk for himself where he lay. Draping his cloak over himself and
doubting any prospect of sleep, he set himself to witness the transit of the celestial
glories as he had once done on secret night excursions as a child. Trying to summon the ephemerides
–
the tables
showing
seasonal planetary positions and subject of no small count of examinationaries at
Athingdon Athy – to mind, he determined himself to witness the transit of tiny Jekyll
across Maudlin’s midnight face. Yet as the great constellations – Vespasio, Medise
Toxothene, Vauxall, the Tides and the Lots with luck-plagued Droid twinkling so
innocently from within – span in radiant glory across the benighted dome, the
silent rhythmic throb of the cromster’s gastrines and the gentle yawing of the
deck lulled him…
* * * * *
7 comments:
The intriuging bits begin to revolve around the a hub. Monster lords send emmissaries to the Lapinduce while out east things have not quieted after the fall of Wormstool. Quite the contrary, it seems multiple states are now investing efforts to stave back the utterworsts from the Bloodslowe. And beyond that dreaded bog of bogles lies our measuring man's mistress. Economous may find himself in the midst of many more monsters than he wishes. The fact Dolours wanted his report only strengthens my hunch that Economous will be tied into this upheaval.
Besides these tidings of things to come, it is rather interesting to find an MBT character out of her usual context and cares (read Threnody). Somehow I didn't picture Dolours wearing a tricorn.
-Ben
Lady Dolours! I'm sorry to see her go only moments after confirming that it really is her. But I suppose the door is open for her to appear again.
I concur with Ben's observation about the many bits revolving around your hero. When you began I assumed (without good reason, seeing how many Victorian writers crafted huge novels by publishing a series of episodes) that this would be a novella. But a big enough bank of mysteries and storm clouds are on the horizon now that it feels like an epic in the making.
Twas good to see the Lady Dolours once again!
Any chance of a colorful sketch of one of the Useless pediteers, along the lines of the previous troops that we have seen in the past, please?
Good job on fending off the fears and delivering more of this great epic. I find when I've got a particularly tough bit of writing to do (science writing however) I get around the fear of the task by sneaking up on it tangentially, knocking out small bits of text that feel safer and then building around them.
I particularly enjoyed the touch of astronomy in this section. It's always fun to think of how another culture sees the stars.
Yes, i also enjoyed the mention of the constellations.
Hobpossums?? Is that a first mention?
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