Survived and enlarged of property, what will Economous do now with his entry into a wider wilder world? What great heights of confidence and action will he now achieve from such wondrous happenstance?
I like that you get to see my "working in progress": the blanks and spaces that must occur until things are fully fathomed. Writing happens by layers, I have found, rather than some great single largely correct out-pouring - or maybe that is just my limitation. Ah well, as long as it gets writ, I do not mind.
I am also very gratified to learn that the tale (up to now at least) has not perhaps taken any presumed routes: I hope I might continue to keep you guessing (for your entertainment, of course, and not just for the sake of it or to some how fell "cleverer").
Blessings.
Economous
musgrove
© D.M.Cornish
PLEASE DO NOT PUBLISH OR REPRODUCE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION
Chapter 5 PART 1
Wretched Obscurity
concometrist ~ definition …… Properly the Amicable
Fraternity of Athenaeus, a great and learned father of history, said to be the
last great scholar of Phlegm and the first king of the Attics …………MORE………
The chase lead him
back and about through trees, the over-sized rabbit called Ogh proving every
bit as fractious as its twin, leaping on and on, pausing just in view then
springing away when Economous hurried near only to halt once again and wait to
be pursued. Fumbling and faltering, hands reaching grasp for his stolen satchel
if ever he was near enough to Ogh to try, Economous was unwittingly drawn to
the very gates of the Moldwood. Here before the very foot of the now closed
park gates, the rabbit-thief simply dropped the satchel and job done, leapt
away into the dark before Economous could do another thing.
Frame heaving
as he caught his breath at last, the would-be fabulist jogged to a halt and
snatched up his bag, looking up at the black-iron gate – now shut at days end –
as he did. A sly smile twitched at the corners of Economous’ mouth as he
considered that the gate was likely locked and that he was held within the park
for the night, forcing the Duke of Rabbits to play host again, at least until
morning. He gave the wrought frame a single testing tug and found with a start
and sinking wind that it came open. Someone
is not doing their duty, he thought with a sharp look to the cheerily lit
windows of the gatekeeper’s cottage built into the very stone wall of the park.
Hurrying home
as full night took hold, Economous was glad it was dark. For, if it was day he
was certain all could read upon his face that he possessed the wondrous,
outrageously damning knowledge of a monster found in the inner-most precincts
of the city; a nicker-lord dwelling undetected behind the many rings of curtain
wall raised over centuries to keep such dread things out. Uncomfortable
feelings leapt up painfully from long unheeded wells of childhood memory. His
fellow townsfolk of Lo had regarded him with perplexing caution after his
survival from the harthwood savaging, and he was certain all the nameless
city-living souls passing now about him on the slate-cobbled walks were casting
the same sceptical – almost accusing – looks his way.
Somehow found
his way home. Up the tight stairs, door opened then locked again against all
the suspicions, he lay abed his soul and mind animated by perplexing
combination of relief to be off hostile streets and a low aching kind of grief
at so brief a time with a king of monsters so abruptly concluded. Agitated and
sleepless, he took out the mystic black elder calibrator – his fee for services
rendered – from is bag. The instant he grasped the mystic wood a buzzing –
quick, almost alive – transmitted into his palm and up his arm. What was this
thing he had been paid, this object of the monster world? Was it everyman-made,
or monster-made? Did monsters even make
things? The Lapinduce would surely have the answers – if only Economous had
thought to ask such wonders before he
had been so suddenly ejected.
“That does it,”
he said in a flash of clarity to the steep, thickly beamed ceiling.
He would make
good on his declaration to return fully equipped to the Lapinduce’s lair to
paint a proper, wall-worthy daub of the great creature, something to even begin
to approach some small beginning of parity with so extravagant overpayment.
Thus resolved, Economous
closed his eyes and remembered nothing more until morning.
*
* * * *
Again and again, Economous returned
with easel, paints, brushes and canvas to seek the Rabbit Duke out, searching
far into the trees, spending whole days on nothing else, trying to retrace
those steps on that wondrous day that had lead him to the monster-lord. Yet
every time he was certain he was on the right trail, it just deposited on the
far side of the Mouldwood – by the street known as the Dove – or simply lead
him back where he had begun. At other moments on promising trails he found the
threwd about him grow so heavy and daunting that he actually staggered under
its invisible, formless pressure and weeping with frustration, was forced to
withdraw. This at least was some small confirmation in the midst of his growing
self- rebuking doubt that something
dread and intelligent dwelt in the park.
For an entire
week and into the next Economous employed himself in this fruitless hunt, careless
of washing, of changes of clothes, of eating, missing his single, precious
weekly meeting with Asthetica in his obsession. It was a great outpouring of
effort to round out the year and it produced nought: he never saw the Lapinduce
again, nor even once glimpsed either of the over-large buck-rabbits that were
the urchin’s servants.
Yet it was a
letter found forced under the jamb of his garret door that finally brought him
to sense. It must have been hand delivered, for all official post always came
by the intermediary of Missus Everrest, his patient yet scornful landlady. The
hand that had written his name so elegantly upon its facing fold was
unmistakably that of his beloved. It read:
Mister Musgrove
You are missed.
It was
concluded by a stamp of the ellegant manu propa – the personal sign – that Asthetica
had formed for her at no small fee by the notable manua proscripta writer,
Blandus Sandle.
That was the
entirety of the message, but its effect was like a blow.
Taking a hold
of himself, Economous left his garret, went down and sat outside upon the
stony bunkhouse step to write a reply to leave with Madam Grouse. Being the
middle of a Solemnday – indeed, the second to last day of the year – he knew
well enough that his beloved would not be at her home but working as all the
most modern lectry-class girls did these days. Stylus hovering above a blank
letter page, he blinked up at the sky, a dazzling stripe within its frame of
steeply peaked half-house roofs and many many jutting chimnies.
About him the
Brandenbrass hummed with a very tangible expectancy of Lestwich – the last day
of the year – a defiant show of enthusiasm to push back the heavy expectation
of sudden disaster that had gripped one and all since Winstermill’s fall. On
the lane before him that went down to the markets and along the street on
either hand, wreaths and withies of boxthorn – the traditional monster deterrent
– festooned every transom, ledge and lintel in far greater number than Economous
recalled from any previous year-sending. Intersped with these were hung small
flags of empire and of city: the golden Imperial owl against a barred field of
rouge and leuc – red and white, and a rabbit in ducal blue against bars of leuc
and sable – black and white, flying together in heightened anticipation of the
Emperor’s imminent arrival in the new year. Not normally given – like all good
concometrists – to the common mania for anything Imperial, Economous found that
he too held a small but certain thrill at the thought of the Emperor, Procrustès IV Clementis Rex Haacobin
himself – and his grand court with him – stepping the streets of Brandenbrass.
The formally stated cause for the visit was the display of yet another Imperial
grandson and continuing addition to the posterity of the Haacobin line: the
very child whose arrival into this vexing world had prompted the changing of
the spring-time months. Yet in actual purpose it was far more their great
imperial father coming, bringing comfort to them all.
Tapping stylus
to chin for a further pondering moment, Economous watched the cerulean-hued
sigil dancing upon the city’s flags: Con Robbart was the name common souls had
for it – Cuniculus Robustus, the Stalwart Rabbit. Did Brandenbrass’ masters know just how present and apt a symbol it
was? The general reckoning was that the sigil simply stood for the crowd of
rabbits that infested the nooks and shadows of Brandenbrass. Had the historied founders of this grand,
long-thriving city once actually known who it was that dwelt in their midst?
Had they knowingly built their city about the dread monster-lord? How else
could it be that the Moldwood had been so long preserved despite the centuries
of ever-increasing expansion and crowding demand? Coming quickly, one upon
the next, such shocking thoughts came like a blow, yet as disconcerting as
these might have been, the final conclusion came with all the sting of a
ringing slap:
Do the
current lords know even now?
8 comments:
Huzzah! Thank you sir, for another fine installment of Economous Musgrove. I for one am delighted. I have often wondered about the Haacobin family and now perhaps I shall get a chance to glimpse a few.
Two courts or more, eh? Hadn't considered that possibility. Also, thanks for hearing my point about concometrists and the need to make this book accessible to new readers.
Now after we've gotten the first bout of excitement through, I can see things starting to be set in the que for momentous happenings later in the story. I had quite forgotten, for example, the emperor's impending tour of the Soutlands. I also get the impression that invidical attitudes run high around new years, which could make things difficult for our more open-minded measurer.
Thanks for the new post
-Ben
I've noticed a discrepancy - In the explicarium for Foundling under the entry for emperor it says: "The current Emperor is Scepticus XLV Haacobin Menanges, who is working to reconcile the Didodumese and their supporters to his dynasty's claim."
However with this update the emperor has changed to Procrustès IV Clementis Rex Haacobin. A dynastic change perhaps between Foundling and Factotum?
Funny thing is, Mr Ben, is that so far all that you are reading was written last year; I anticipated your concern 12 months ago. Our instincts are aligned, it seems \o/
Ah, yes, Menanges: you know I know this and but forgot to remember, honest: that was/is the entire point of the explicarii - to collate necessary information for me too (I actually have the three MBTs close by when I write for this very reason). I recall at the time just putting this Clementis fellow in as a placeholder as I wrote until I reminded myself of who it ought to be, and here I am now, dropping the ball in public. Ahh, well, better now than some final printed story... It is clearly time for me to chart the Haacobin dynasty properly :\
Also, thank you so much BrokenSphere, for all your hard work with the wiki - I use it myself when notebooks and explicarium prove too obtuse and resistant, so bravo, I say, bravo.
Thank you Mr. Cornish, for providing such a wealth of material to work with! Since you have already conceived Procrustès IV, I am sure that a place will be found for him.
Asthetica’s note wasn’t as much of a blow to me as it was to Economous, but I was much surprised and am back to the drawing board guessing about where Asthetica is coming from. I think that it’s really, really hard for even a good person not to become manipulative and self centered if everyone they meet dotes on them. So, I’m still not convinced that Asthetica isn’t just playing mind games. But I have to admit that her note seems powerfully simple and sincere. If she’s faking it, you’re doing a fine job of making her as good at acting as she is beautiful.
And the buzzing of the calibrator in Economous’ hand makes me wonder if an ulterior purpose of the Lapinduce was, for some reason we don’t know yet, to introduce that item into the city. I have no certainty about this, of course. It’s just a thought that buzzed into my head during the night after reading the latest update. It’s the sort of thing that probably would have never occurred to me, at least not consciously, if I were reading the whole story in one sitting rather than in bite sized installments.
Getting caught up, at last! I'm so happy there's more Half Continent to explore!
(Apologies, Mr. Cornish, as I know these are rough drafts. but I couldn't help but stumble over ((one of my own grammatical bug-a-boos)) the past tense of 'to lead' - I see you have it as 'lead,' as do so many others do these days. Was this a typo, or do you think the word 'led' is actually fading out of the language? I see this often, as a business writer, and I've always assumed it was busy executives over-relying on spellcheck, but ... I'd be interested to know your thoughts: Is this another example of our language being "alive"?)
- old aggie
Cleveland, USA
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